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Monday, June 10, 2019

The Night In The Woods (Narrative)

The Night In The Woods

CHAPTER ONE: Hear the Whistle of the dead woods
“Hear that whistling Jake?” Jasmine speaked with curiosity.
 “Yes, who could be whistling at night?”.
“Dinners ready!”
 Mum shouted, “ok!” Jasmine and Jake both shouted in surprise.
They went downstairs talking about the whistle. “Whats wrong” Mum asked, “Nothing” they both respond pretending nothing happened while they were upstairs. They were eating their dinner quietly that their Mum knew that there were something wrong because it wasn’t like them eating quietly.
Their Mum sended them upstairs to their room, to play with their toys while their Mum washed the dishes. “Mum looked worried about us” Jake answered in sadness “bu-but we can’t tell her”, “tell me about what” mom entered the room asking them, they didn’t respond to the question instead they hugged her to make her feel better after keeping a long secret, “Mum, we don’t feel safe in this house, we just heard a whistle a moment before you came in we tried ignoring it Mum Jasmine explained.
“Mum we’re scared when we’re alone, can we sleep with you tonight” Jake asked in a terrified way.
Of course. They went all together in their Mum’s room and their Mum sang them a song.
*I sing this song to my little angel , they shall not
 Be scared with me to protect them but now it’s time to sleep.
Their Mum sang until they fell asleep. 
At the middle of the night.
“Jake there goes the whistle again, should we tell Mum” Jasmine whispered to Jake, “No, this is our chance to check it out” jake whispered back. They creeped downstairs to the back of the house where they found a shed. “What are you doing here!” “ahh!” Jasmine and jake screamed, an old woman told them to not got to that shed but when they ran back to bed they looked at the window and she was gone but the door was left hanging like she went inside and that's when they saw two pair of eyes  glowing. “What are you doing, I thought you were going to sleep with me” their Mum asked, “W-we jus-just needed to d-drink water” Jasmine answer in fright, their Mum put them back to sleep.

Chapter two:The Broken Curse or is it…
“I really think we need to tell Mum” Jake respond, “No if we tell her we’ll just make her sad” Jasmine answered in furious, “let’s check that shed again please” Jasmine begged, “fine, but if anything bad happens it’s your fault” Jake mumbled,“YES!” Jasmine shouted, they went to the shed and looked around if the old woman is still there and lucky she wasn’t, “heh I think she was just trying to scare us” Jasmine laughed, “I’m not sure about that” Jake mumbled again, they both went inside to see all around was stuffed dead animals they were screaming they both ran back to the house where their mother asked why were they screaming the explained “w-we went in the shed and saw all a-around th-the walls were de-dead and stuffed animals”,“but I just went in and saw it was clean and a woman was cleaning it, maybe it was you imagination or you bad dream you had last night”,they ran to their bedroom window and found the exact same woman cleaning it, then the woman looked straight at them, they both got scared and ran back downstairs, then they saw the old woman sitting on one of the chairs ready to eat,“Honey this is matilda she came to greet us and come for breakfast” their Mum answered them without and question. They ate their breakfast quietly actually more quiet than usual “umm Mum were going upstairs” Jake spoken in nervousness, “Umm,ok” their Mum let them go to their room, “What are we going to do and nice excuse by the way” Jasmine asked and greeted Jake. They both went to the window and saw the shed’s door was still open they curled up into a ball in fear, “Really,What are we going to do” Jasmine asked in fear, “well she is still down st-” that’s where their Mum came in and Jake didn’t get to finish his sentence, “That was rude why did you both do that, is this how I teached you both” their Mum asked, Jasmine and Jake apologized. Their Mum told them to go to the garden to play so they went, “Mum won’t believe us is we tell her” Jake whispered while they go down stairs but Jasmine didn’t answer back. Jasmine peeked at the shed when they were playing, “I think we should face our fear” Jasmine spoke up in confidence, so they went in. They looked around and saw a letter,
If you are reading this note make sure you don’t look at
An old woman’s eyes in the middle of the night
Because you’ll start hallucinating that the old woman
Is everywhere, SO BE CA-
“umm , are we hallucinating about the old woman we saw” Jake asked shaking in fear, “umm, I don’t really know let’s go back to the shed at night but we wear blindfolds”.
At the middle of the night…
“Wake up” Jasmine whispered while packing the blindfold, “umm,ok” Jake whispered back to Jasmine.
They went down the stairs and looked to their sides and continued walking, they used a stick to find their way down the stairs, “UMM, What a-are we goi-”, “shh” Jasmine spoke in the darkness. They entered the shed in fear, “wait” Jake whispered to Jasmine, “what” Jasmine whispered back, Jake gulped,”there’s something moving” Jake whispered, “AHHHH,RUN, RUN” Jasmine shouted. They ran fast as they could to get back in the house but when they opened the door it was a mysterious forest. “Umm, where are we” Jake whispered, Jasmine sighed “I think we’re LOST” Jasmine said in a feared way, but then they remembered that the note said “make sure you don’t look at
An old woman’s eyes in the middle of the night
Because you’ll start hallucinating that the old woman
Is everywhere”, Jasmine and Jake both gasp, “were hallucinating, so maybe WE DO KNOW WHERE OUR HOME IS” Jasmine talked in surprise, while walking to a brick wall, “hmm,this colour is familiar, IT’S OUR HOME”, Jake shouted. They went inside and they’re hallucinating stopped, PANTING, they ran to their room and hid under their blankets, “I’m so s-scared, what do we do Jasmine” Jake asked, “WE TELL MOM BY TOMORROW” Jasmine shouted in a feared way.
NEXT MORNING…
“MUM-MUM” Jasmine woke her mom up and explains everything.
“GO PACK YOUR THING TWINS” their Mum shouted while cooking breakfast. They ate breakfast and packed their thing but when they were moving they could still see her.

Characters: Jake, Jasmine,Kate(Mum),Addison(an old women).

parts:Jake and Jasmine Twin, Kate(Mum),Addison(an old women).

Story:an old woman was cursing an old forest with a house in front, she lived in a shed at the back at the house but then two kids which are twins discovered it and they managed to stop the curse.
THE END OR IS IT...

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